雅思写作旅行:我们相同,但同时我们也都与众不同
2019-06-23 21:32 | 编辑:川外外语培训中心  来自:未知 
导读:雅思大作文task2相关于全球化或者旅游的话题一直是一个考试的热点。马上要暑假了,很多同学有旅游计划,不管是游山玩水还是单纯的买买买都是感觉轻松+休闲的。但是当我们在雅思(和托福)大作文当中遇到这类话题的时候很多人的想法就会局限在交朋友
      雅思大作文task2相关于全球化或者旅游的话题一直是一个考试的热点。马上要暑假了,很多同学有旅游计划,不管是游山玩水还是单纯的买买买都是感觉轻松+休闲的。但是当我们在雅思(和托福)大作文当中遇到这类话题的时候很多人的想法就会局限在交朋友啊、放松啊一系列所谓的黄金论点上。并不是不能用这些简单的思路,而是很多人处理这种思路的扩展的时候写出来东西也十分单一、千篇一律。
      小川一直觉得看似容易的话题,实则是非常难的。因为要让自己脱颖而出就真的很难。接下来我们需要好好看下面的内容,在遇到此类话题的时候不再懵逼!我们来看看这种话题之前有考过什么具体样的题目:
·          International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?
 
·          Some people think traveling abroad is necessary while others think that is not necessary because TV and the internet can give the same information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
 
·          (重点,下半年很有可能会考) Tourism is one of the largest industries in the world. Some say that it brings about large economic and cultural benefits, while others would argue that it influences tourist destinations in negative ways Discuss both views and give your opinion
 
·          (重点,下半年很有可能会考)Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aimed at tourists, other people believe that it is the only way to save such conditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
 
·          (重点,下半年很有可能会考) Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
开篇
       我们来看看怎么对‘旅游业并不能促进国家间相互理解’这个要点进行阐述(此段比较长,但是大家可以想想怎么来选择一些表达和内容放在雅思作文当中)
开篇的话:
The tourist trade【旅游业的地道说法】 is booming【兴旺,替换low词developing】. Superb【棒的,替换low词good】 transport systems by air, sea and land make it possible for us to visit each other's countries at a moderate cost【适度的成本,就是低价的意思】. What was once the 'grand tour', is now within everybody's grasp【触手可得的地道说法】. But what's the sense of this mass exchange of populations if the nations of the world remain basically ignorant of【无知,替换understand】 each other?
主体
       小川其实本身就非常不支持【旅游业促进国家间相互理解】这句话,我来说说我的看法:
Many tourist organisations【旅游公司地道说法】 are directly responsible for【A对B负责,也就是说A是B的原因】 this state of affairs【事态,替换low词situation】. They deliberately【故意;副词亮点】 protect their clients from too much contact with the local population. Specifically【具体说;连接词;副词亮点】, some tourists stay at international hotels, where they eat international food while gazing at the natives from a distance【定语从句亮点】. Conducted tours【旅行团地道说法】 to places of interest【旅游景点地道说法】 are carefully censored. The tourists are allowed to see only what the organisers want them to see and no more, and a strict schedule makes it impossible for the tourists to wander off【漫步地道说法】 on their own. More sadly【更可悲地;连接词;副词亮点】, this situation leads to the persistence of national stereotypes【对国家的刻板印象】. That means【意味着;连接词】 when people set out【出发地道说法】 on their travels, the only characteristics they notice are those which confirm their preconceptions【定语从句亮点】, say【举例的标志词】, ‘every British is rigid’. Perhaps, they only have to make a few foreign friends to understand how absurd national stereotypes are【宾语从句亮点】, but how can they make foreign friends when the tourist trade does its best to prevent them?【让步+反驳;亮点论证手段】
       你选择留学的国家是哪一个?为什么?你对即将去的国家和其他的国家有什么刻板印象吗?像是…‘法国浪漫’‘美国奔放’‘英国绅士’?我觉得这种genralisation很危险的,其实We are all similar to each other and at the same time all unique(我们相同,但同时我们也都与众不同)

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